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At my cloud - seeking adviceby *Zindy

Traditional Art / Drawings / Fantasy

This is a drawing I've had in progress for some days but have some doubts about it. I originally intended clouds all around her. However, I am now thinking to only add the clouds under her and letting it fade into white. Same goes for her wings, instead of finishing them, then having them fade. I just am not sure what will look better.
What do you think?

I think, after scanning her, perhaps her wings are a little too high up. I am trying to make them look like they are protecting her from above but maybe they should be lowered a little.

Feel free to give me your thoughts and suggestions.

Credit to Jessica, for the reference: [link]

Critique by ~LeavexAxWhisper Apr 20, 2009, 6:22:00 PM

First I want to say that this is a very good piece. The shading is all right (as it usually is with your work).

One thing I notice in your comments was that you think her wings should be lower, I agree with that. The height at which the wings are at now makes it look a little as though they are attached to her neck.

I like your idea of the fading of the wings and the clouds. I do also think that it may look best if you just go with clouds beneath her. I think if you were to put clouds all around her it may take away from the picture, depending on how close you put them toward her body.

I think you are doing very well with this one. I can't wait to see it finished.

What do you think?

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~xShillyx May 3, 2012 Hobbyist Traditional Artist

She looks absolutely beautiful despite being incomplete. Being a huge fan of angels the wings look fine the way they are because they're hiding the part where they join with the body. Its really a matter of how large you want the wings in comparison to the body.